tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5891116945384033463.post7009779831703629802..comments2020-06-18T13:25:21.451-06:00Comments on Love 4 Emmalee: Emmaleehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01216358561825012940noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5891116945384033463.post-82359724695400510152012-01-03T01:43:17.913-07:002012-01-03T01:43:17.913-07:00Thanks Abbie!Thanks Abbie!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10306553146919905267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5891116945384033463.post-72786296452758929142012-01-02T21:56:40.309-07:002012-01-02T21:56:40.309-07:00Thank you for sharing this incredibly moving story...Thank you for sharing this incredibly moving story. Your strength is far beyond words. Best of luck on your book and touching many more lives.Abbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16452953300651634869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5891116945384033463.post-80332698360633117502011-01-18T18:03:19.193-07:002011-01-18T18:03:19.193-07:00Thanks Susan! I just sent you an e-mailThanks Susan! I just sent you an e-mailAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10306553146919905267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5891116945384033463.post-80366776551599063142011-01-18T09:21:30.589-07:002011-01-18T09:21:30.589-07:00Hi Steve...what a story. You have gone through a ...Hi Steve...what a story. You have gone through a lot in this short little life of ours. I am so sorry about the loss of your wife and your baby girl. <br /><br />My husband took his life 2 years ago and it inspired me to write as well...it is not easy to relive the emotions but I think critical in healing.<br /><br />I am proud of you for opening up and sharing your writing. It takes courage. You obviously have that. <br /><br />Here is my personal feedback but what do I know. :-)<br /><br />I would have to say that I liked the first version. The very first line grabbed me emotionally and gripped me until the end. The first one seemed more straight from the heart from a Dad who lost his baby girl...more revealing of the pain you and the people closest to her experienced. The second was a little more focused on other people, the many nameless, faceless people that face challenges in life. <br /><br />I like version that offers a little more insight into your personal relationship with Emmalee. Don't get me wrong...the second version is fabulous too! <br /><br />I would love to hear what kind of feedback you get from others. Looking forward to reading the rest. <br /><br />Susan Butler CampbellAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com